100 wc 29/11 week 8

… we seemed to be on the television…

My goal is to use more dialogue in my writing.

“Wow 2 amazing girls are on television. I wish I could go on television it would be an absolute dream for. Anyway one of them aren’t going to drop out.” Lily talking to herself as everyone one knows she would want to be on that show.

Ring, ring from her telephone and she gets a phone call saying that shes invited to the show. Lily goes.

She does the act better than shes ever tried before. Astonishing.

She gets back home to see her on television with the person she was performing with.

… we seemed to be on the television…

 

 

 

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